Blakant's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[EAW:Episode1]

What happen?

Wen I first watch the preloader, & the dude pull the sponge from the wall, I was thinking to vote it 4 or 5...

But wen things get weird & the story/visual get worse, I changed my mind, I vote it 3.

I dunno y suddenly things get crappy while the 1st part & preloader are good/excellent, maybe u got tired or something. If so, try to take some rest den continue on ur work.. How bout make more storyline? Instead of music video /
inner expression? cuz ppl DO enjoy story...

Good luck in the future!

PS : The credit & preloader got style in it, try to make more something like dat,
Simple & plain, but not too simple

evilatwork responds:

Its a collaboration things should be random.

[The Smoking Kills Collab]

Good

It, good...
Rlly enjoy the whole thing & good job!

[If I had Superpowers]

Something Is Here

Ok, dude...

I must say something great in the making here, juz it has been delivered not at it best way...
Ur style of making the BG all white r okay, the character COULD be more interactive and alive.. and ur drawing need some improvement, not much, juz a little to get it look more alive, know?

I think u should aware ur stage size, cuz at the Credit, some words & the character have been left out... Before u do anything in a scene, try to add a guideline using the ruler (Ctrl + Alt + Shift + R) so u wont do that mistake again..

The power thing are pretty impressive, especially the blue ray thing.. it contract like a real beam does, so congrats...

Altho my work r'nt that great, thats all I can say... :)
How bout u make another version of this, juz make it a lil more better...
Who knows, maybe u'll get a daily award from dat!

[Patch 001]

Longer pls

Well, nothing much to say...

I think it need some sort of music, suitable music..... Like a peaceful kid music...
Yeah, and rlly need to be longer, cuz it's way too short, juz started to enjoy it & it's alrdy ended!

[If the Ice Caps Melt...]

Dont be lazy!

Alright, dude..

I know u got soul for the nature & all...
But Peet, dude... Dont be lazy to add lot of Layers!!

The melt look kinda weird & Im sure cuz most of the part are all were in the same layer! Make each part for it's own layer. Maybe u can do like these...

- Right Mountain Shade
- Right Mountain Base
- Mid-Right Mountain Shade
- Mid-Right Mountain Base
- Mid Mountain Shade
- So On...
- Wave1
- Wave2
- Sea (All Blue)

Okay, second... Try to experiment to use ur OWN colour, dont use the GIVEN colour... use the colour that are near the grey/black part, u know almost bottom of the colour customize thing...

Example for sea colour :
I'll give u the code, & U see it in Flash Pro 8
#4D798A

Trees :
#697643

And lastly that I still wanna add here is...
DON'T USE TOO MUCH RADIAL / LINEAR.
Pro dont use that very much... If they do, they wont use black against bright green, okay?
If pro use it, they will use green & SLIGHTLY darker green.

That's all, good luck, Peet!

[Hien's Revenge]

Need more creativity

Alright,

I said this alot to the animator who use ppl's sprite in their project..
Pls pls pls, make ur own character, use movieclip to replace the "Sprite" thing..
Im sure u can do it, by judging the way u managed to make the fight lo9ok... good.

Love the fight, but need more originality, dude!
Keep up, & make ur own character next time!

[Rules On Fuzzy 1]

Not bad....

First of all, welcome to world of newgrounds!
Alright, to me...
It's pretty simple story, maybe a little too simple...

The bear sleeping body are kinda rough.. Need more layer on it, maybe each body part for each player, so u can juz resize juz the body & not the head. The head are should juz be move up & down, okay?

I like ur "Theme" song, kinda cool wif the self-record soundtracks, lol.

Now the worse part I can see from this... The lipsynth.
Ur character mouth juz playing open & close, dude..
It need more juz dan dat... How bout set ur voice to "Stream", NOT "Event"
That way, u can make the mouth follow according to his every words...

Overall, pretty good for starter, keep going & u might get to ur goal in dis thing.

[Terkoiz Vs. Zackie]

Nice

Oh, nice movie dude...

But pls pls pls pls pls pls PLS! Dont make stickman... I prefer human figure!
Anyway, love the camera, fighting moves & the.... stairs.. hah!

Zackie responds:

sry but i'm sticking to sticks

["The Car"]

Sound pls

Okay,

To me the movie are simple, maybe too simple...
Its juz a car accelarate & den ran over a block & explode.

Even u want to do it, make the car a lil bit more detailed, juz enough to cover up the very very very very short clip.

Oh, I know dis is a small, but next time, put a icon on ur movie!
Cuz most no-icon submission usually juz playing "I wanna be blam", okay?

Oh, last thing, put music or at least SFX, like car engine, car landed, and explosion.